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IELTS: writing

MARKING CRITERIATask ResponseCoherence and Cohesion Lexical ResourceGrammatical Range and Accuracy

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Слайд 1IELTS: writing

IELTS: writing

Слайд 3MARKING CRITERIA
Task Response
Coherence and Cohesion
Lexical Resource
Grammatical Range and Accuracy

MARKING CRITERIATask ResponseCoherence and Cohesion Lexical ResourceGrammatical Range and Accuracy

Слайд 4Instructions to candidates
do not open a question paper until you

are told to do so
name and candidate at the top

of a page
read the instructions for both of the tasks
150 words for task 1
250 words for task 2
write your answers in the answer booklet
write clearly in pen or pencil
you may make alterations

Instructions to candidates do not open a question paper until you are told to do soname and

Слайд 5Bands explained

Bands explained

Слайд 6The Do’s of IELTS Essay
– Conciseness (8-15 words per sentence) –

Cohesion (link ideas, paragraphs, sentences together) – Coherence (all ideas should

be easily understood by the reader) – Composition (use the correct essay structure) – Answer the question fully (cover all points asked in the task statement)

The Do’s of IELTS Essay – Conciseness (8-15 words per sentence) – Cohesion (link ideas, paragraphs, sentences

Слайд 7Band 7+ essays need

a) more complex sentence structure
b) more complex

vocabulary
c) more complex grammatical use and variation

Band 7+ essays needa) more complex sentence structureb) more complex vocabularyc) more complex grammatical use and variation

Слайд 8Tips
– Use the official writing task 2 form to

practice and check what 250 words look like in your

own handwriting
– Read many essay topics/sample essays
– Know the right structure for all essay types
– Know when to give your opinion
Tips – Use the official writing task 2 form to practice and check what 250 words look

Слайд 9Tips
– Add examples from your own experience if asked
– Use

academic words and noun groups
– Use punctuation correctly
– Separate the

arguments “for” and “against” into different paragraphs
– Use the right tone – formal
– Only use possessive/personal pronouns when giving your opinion
– Lead from one paragraph to another well – connecting words are vital!
Tips– Add examples from your own experience if asked– Use academic words and noun groups– Use punctuation

Слайд 10Tips
– Vary grammar
– Write neatly
– Write maturely
– Make a plan

in 3-5 minutes
– Conveys a positive image
– Make your

opinion very clear
Tips – Vary grammar– Write neatly– Write maturely– Make a plan in 3-5 minutes– Conveys a positive

Слайд 11The Don’ts of IELTS Essay
– Write too many words if

your English is average (aim for 250-265)
– Use contractions

Overuse connecting words (assessors expect that!)
– Jump from one idea to the next: link, link, link!
– Mix arguments “for” and “against” in the same paragraph
– Use the wrong tone (essays are always formal)
– Use abbreviations
The Don’ts of IELTS Essay– Write too many words if your English is average (aim for 250-265)–

Слайд 12The Don’ts of IELTS Essay
– Repeat words or overuse primitive

verbs – Cross out many things – Write illegibly – Use idioms too

frequently or inappropriately – Write in a babyish manner – Become a clock victim – Start writing without a plan
The Don’ts of IELTS Essay– Repeat words or overuse primitive verbs – Cross out many things –

Слайд 13The Don’ts of IELTS Essay
– Forget to leave a blank

line between paragraphs
– Use generalisations (“All”, “Every”)
– Use simple sentences

if you want a high score
– Use clichés
– Use ‘lazy’ expressions
– Copy part of task question
– Agree with both sides
– Let adrenaline make you arrogant
– Go off topic
The Don’ts of IELTS Essay– Forget to leave a blank line between paragraphs– Use generalisations (“All”, “Every”)–

Слайд 14Examples: Academic WT 1

Examples: Academic WT 1

Слайд 15BAR CHART
The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living

in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting

and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
BAR CHARTThe charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015.Summarise the

Слайд 16PIE CHART
The charts below show the reasons why people travel

to work by bicycle or by car.
Summarise the information by

selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
PIE CHARTThe charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.Summarise

Слайд 17LINE GRAPH
The graph below shows population figures for India and

China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up

until 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
LINE GRAPHThe graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted

Слайд 18TABLE
The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales

in three different branches in 2016.
Summarise the information by selecting

and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

TABLEThe table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.Summarise the

Слайд 19Problems: non-native writers

Problems: non-native writers

Слайд 20Problems: non-native writers

Problems: non-native writers

Слайд 21WT 2: ESSAY

WT 2: ESSAY

Слайд 22 Introduction
Purpose:
• the topic
• the aspect of

the topic being dealt with
• the stand (attitude) taken

by the writer
Introduction Purpose: • the topic • the aspect of the topic being dealt with • the

Слайд 23Parts of the introduction

Parts of the introduction

Слайд 25Conclusion

Conclusion

Слайд 26Parts of the conclusion

Parts of the conclusion

Слайд 27Practice
Overall, I agree with the fact that punishment is the

way to avoid the crime to be increased and hence

our lives become more secure. If the wrongdoer wants to be a good man and there is a particular financial or personal problem that led him to the wrong way, then it would be the nice option to forgive him and try to solve the problem he have. Although by this way, some bad man may become effective part of the society but some do not bring themselves to the right path because they are very much used to of it. The person that involved in the crime and never try to stop the law-breaking act should be punished in the extremely serious way. However, it totally depends on the nature of crime. Some crime led to a capital punishment and some may require a small penalty. The law-making institutions are responsible to bring the bad man to the right level of punishment that he deserves. If there is weak legislation to properly handle the offender, it may become our society less secure for the good man. The government should be the responsible authority to provide a secure and better state to live. Laws should be implemented and executed in the most proper way that do not allow the offender to commit violent acts or to break the law in any way and to any extent. To sum up, it is the responsibility of the state runner to stop people to involved in crime. It may be done through solving the problems of the people that led them to commit that violence act or by the punishment accordingly.
PracticeOverall, I agree with the fact that punishment is the way to avoid the crime to be

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