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more important than job satisfaction

Общая информация:
It is common knowledge that

career choice is one of the most important decisions in our life.
Указание на существование противоположных точек зрения:
Some people believe that it is more essential to love what you do, whereas others prefer to focus on a higher salary while choosing a future profession.

others think/believe/consider that …

The problem / issue / question of…

has always aroused heated / sharp disputes /debates / discussions / controversy

Our modern world is unthinkable / unimaginable / inconceivable without… However, there are plenty of people who believe that it is not necessary / doubt the necessity / importance / use / benefit / good of…

…gaining increasing popularity today, many still dispute / doubt / challenge / bring into question / cast doubt on its use for the society

It is often difficult to decide which position to take whenever there is a debate regarding a choice between… and…

мнения, аргументы должны быть развернутыми!
In my opinion, a satisfying job

is way more important than a good income. It fills life with positive emotions giving the energy to accomplish different tasks as we manage our daily routine. Another positive aspect of a fulfilling job is that your performance and, consequently, results are higher if you are keen on the task you are doing. 

believe/ I consider that…/ I am convinced that …
I personally

favour …
To my mind…/ In my opinion…/ It seems to me that…
I can’t but agree that…
I am against…/ I do not approve of…/ I do not support the idea of…/ I personally frown on…
It is said/ believed that…
It goes without saying that…

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Firstly/ first and foremost/ first of all …
A major benefit is that …
To begin/start with, it is important to emphasize that…
Furthermore/ Moreover/ What is more/ Besides, …
A further convincing argument is that …
Another (positive/ negative) aspect of …
Finally/ Lastly

зрения

There are people who have the opposing opinion, for them

the material aspect plays a more important role than the enjoyment from what they do. They justify that position by claiming that the more money you have, the better life you can afford. In their viewpoint money equals opportunities – opportunities for better housing, education and entertainment. (1 аргумент)

point of view. They say that …

They assume/ suppose…

They are

in favour of…/ They approve of… / They favour…

There is another side to the issue/question of …

There are people who have the opposing opinion./ Not all people share my viewpoint.

приведенных аргументов!

However veracious it sounds, I would not agree with

the above mentioned idea. If people do their work for pleasure rather than for money, they will eventually become professionals in a chosen area, and specialists are seldom underpaid or underestimated. Eventually, a favourite job becomes a well-paid one.

we should not forget that… / we should consider the

fact that… / one should not disregard… / one should take into account …
However veracious it sounds, I would not agree with the above mentioned idea.
However, I disagree with these contentions.
I am afraid I cannot agree with these people here as I think …

по данной проблеме, не повторяясь!

To conclude, I am convinced

that an occupation you fancy definitely wins over the one that brings you only money as work occupies a great part of everyday routine and it is more logical to spend this time with pleasure.

all this into account/ consideration…
In short/ conclusion …

common knowledge that career choice is one of the most

important decisions in our life. Some people believe that it is more essential to love what you do, whereas others prefer to focus on a higher salary while choosing a future profession.
In my opinion, a satisfying job is way more important than a good income. It fills life with positive emotions giving the energy to accomplish different tasks as we manage our daily routine. Another positive aspect of a fulfilling job is that your performance and, consequently, results are higher if you are keen on the task you are doing. 
There are people who have the opposing opinion, for them the material aspect plays a more important role than the enjoyment from what they do. They justify that position by claiming that the more money you have, the better life you can afford. In their viewpoint money equals opportunities – opportunities for better housing, education and entertainment.
However veracious it sounds, I would not agree with the above mentioned idea. If people do their work for pleasure rather than for money, they will eventually become professionals in a chosen area, and specialists are seldom underpaid or underestimated. Eventually, a favourite job becomes a well-paid one.
To conclude, I am convinced that an occupation you fancy definitely wins over the one that brings you only money as work occupies a great part of everyday routine and it is more logical to spend this time with pleasure.